My friend Siani Wyatt read through my concept and treatment, and then gave me positive feedback, constructive criticism and asked me questions about ideas that she was uncertain about.
Positive Feedback:
Siani liked the idea of a romantic/horror as my genre breaks the typical stereotype/gnere. She said my storyline seemed like a good one - not too difficult to film and it "ropes in the viewers". She could also picture my opening already, "it sounds great".
Constructive Criticism:
Siani had no constructive criticism for my film opening.
Questions:
- How are you going to show the man dying?
- Are you still going to have the "passionate kiss"?
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